www: youve included camera shots, effects and detail on the shot,which will make it esier to film. ebi: too much dialouge :) x
www: Layout of script is good as you use camera shots, names in capital, dialogue is included. Visually you can see it, as it is simple but descriptive.ebi: Is good, but a bit too much dialogue.
www: youve included camera shots, effects and detail on the shot,which will make it esier to film.
ReplyDeleteebi: too much dialouge
:) x
www: Layout of script is good as you use camera shots, names in capital, dialogue is included. Visually you can see it, as it is simple but descriptive.
ReplyDeleteebi: Is good, but a bit too much dialogue.